Post by antgirl1 on Aug 1, 2006 14:32:38 GMT -5
I want your thoughts on this, a preview of chapter 3 on Twins. Yes, Yo-yo seems a bit...christiantic. But this is a five paragraph preview.XD
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"So, it explains your back," Yo-yo said simply. "What do you mean?" Wilt asked. "I mean that if you sleep on the floor with no mattress, it WON'T be good for your back," Yo-yo explained matter-of-factly. "Sorry," Wilt said. "That never came to me when I gave up my bed for Bloo, I just, um, wanted to..." trailing off, Yo-yo answered for him, "Helpful?" At this Wilt chuckled, blushing a bit, and replied "Yeah..."
"You know, you remind me of my creator, she always wanted to be tall, but was the shortest student in the class," Yo-yo began. "I know she made two imaginary friends, I was one of them, but I don't remember the other one. But boy, did we become fast friends!"
"I mean when we were made all we did that night was talk to each other until we fell asleep," she went on, "Why my creator loved sports, especially Basketball, but whenever she had asked me to play, she would always win, because I was not made to play it. I mean, I'd lose the ball, I'd miss every shot, and I couldn't even dribble the ball without it getting away from me!" She smiled more and went on, "But heck, it made her happy to know I would play it with her, even if I stank,"
"Her other imaginary friend was actually made to play it though, making her better and better at the game, as I just watched, 'cause I didn't want to interfere," her grin faltered a bit. "But I'm glad she was happy with me and the other friend, until death do we part...But I know someday I'll join her up at God's Keep. Then we'll be together forever, or until she gets bored with me and leaves me." She paused a moment. "I'm sorry, am I boring you?"
"No, not really," Wilt replied. "But wait, if you're here, and I'm here too, how'd-?" "Oh that's easy!" Yo-yo grined with her teeth this time. "I picked you up and took you to the town, when I saw this bus, with all these different colors and stuff, and on the side it had "Foster's" written on it with this crazy handwriting! And I thought 'Where have I heard that before?' Then this red-headed girl with this green sweater and a Powerpuff Girls tee-shirt asked me how'd I got you, so I explained, then realized she had met me before, but appearently I had Amnesia or something, since I didn't remember much, or chose not to."
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"So, it explains your back," Yo-yo said simply. "What do you mean?" Wilt asked. "I mean that if you sleep on the floor with no mattress, it WON'T be good for your back," Yo-yo explained matter-of-factly. "Sorry," Wilt said. "That never came to me when I gave up my bed for Bloo, I just, um, wanted to..." trailing off, Yo-yo answered for him, "Helpful?" At this Wilt chuckled, blushing a bit, and replied "Yeah..."
"You know, you remind me of my creator, she always wanted to be tall, but was the shortest student in the class," Yo-yo began. "I know she made two imaginary friends, I was one of them, but I don't remember the other one. But boy, did we become fast friends!"
"I mean when we were made all we did that night was talk to each other until we fell asleep," she went on, "Why my creator loved sports, especially Basketball, but whenever she had asked me to play, she would always win, because I was not made to play it. I mean, I'd lose the ball, I'd miss every shot, and I couldn't even dribble the ball without it getting away from me!" She smiled more and went on, "But heck, it made her happy to know I would play it with her, even if I stank,"
"Her other imaginary friend was actually made to play it though, making her better and better at the game, as I just watched, 'cause I didn't want to interfere," her grin faltered a bit. "But I'm glad she was happy with me and the other friend, until death do we part...But I know someday I'll join her up at God's Keep. Then we'll be together forever, or until she gets bored with me and leaves me." She paused a moment. "I'm sorry, am I boring you?"
"No, not really," Wilt replied. "But wait, if you're here, and I'm here too, how'd-?" "Oh that's easy!" Yo-yo grined with her teeth this time. "I picked you up and took you to the town, when I saw this bus, with all these different colors and stuff, and on the side it had "Foster's" written on it with this crazy handwriting! And I thought 'Where have I heard that before?' Then this red-headed girl with this green sweater and a Powerpuff Girls tee-shirt asked me how'd I got you, so I explained, then realized she had met me before, but appearently I had Amnesia or something, since I didn't remember much, or chose not to."