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Post by tonya on Jul 21, 2006 5:01:51 GMT -5
Hey guys, I just wrote a poem. Here it goes...... ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
I was right there with you always, through the good times and the bad. I was there when you were happy, or was angry and were sad. I was you're security blanket, always by you're side at night, and when you got scared I was always there for you to hold me tight. And whenever you got lonley, not having any friends, you told me that you loved me, and we were friends untill the end. I remember all the good times that we used to share, but latley when I call you're name you forget that I'm still there. And then as you get older,going out with all you're friends, I sit here and remember us, us friends untill the end. Latley I have realized we are drifting far apart, and by that very thought, it is breaking my heart. I am happy for you, you have friends and are happy, but I am sad now knowing that you have forgotten me. I may be imaginary, but I have feelings too, so just remember that I have never forgotten you.
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Post by emma on Jul 21, 2006 5:41:39 GMT -5
That's a really nice poem. I especially love the last few lines!
...But, shouldn't this be in fanfiction?
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Post by tonya on Jul 21, 2006 5:49:44 GMT -5
THANKS!!!! I didin't think about it, but thanks for the advice! I had no clue where to post it.
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Post by taranchula on Jul 21, 2006 8:24:18 GMT -5
THANKS!!!! I didin't think about it, but thanks for the advice! I had no clue where to post it. Don't worry I took care of that for you.
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Post by imaginaryxlight on Jul 21, 2006 13:41:45 GMT -5
::wipes away tear:: Wow, that was a really nice poem. And so sad too
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Post by tonya on Jul 21, 2006 17:43:24 GMT -5
Thank you! I was inspired to right this last night (well actually, it was in the middle of the morning hours) by thinkung about my old IF Casper the friendly ghost. He was my only friend I had my whole childhood, untill I was about 11, then that's when we started to drift apart. Then I had forgotten about him for 3 years untill we reunited not to long ago this year. I was thinking what it may have been like to be an IF , being unreal and unloved by world but you're kid, and how lost, lonley and depressing it must feel to be forgotten.
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Post by tonya on Jul 24, 2006 21:12:45 GMT -5
Um....This one isin't a poem at all, this is a song I wrote. Okay, now remember when All in The Family first comes on and we see Archy and Edith on the piano singing Those Were the Days? I've wrote my own version of the song, um, It has Wilt's name in it but I'm not sure if I wrote it about OUR Wilt or Wilt Chamberlain. Well, here it goes... ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Boy the way Chamberlain played, games that made the NBA, just like us they had it made,
Those Were the Days. And you knew who you were then, girls were girls and men were
men, Mr. we could use a man like Wilt Chamberlain again, Micheal Jordan and Jackson,
are completly different men, and now you know so you can grin, Those Were the Days. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Yeah, the ending was kind of silly, but those were the only lines I could think of.
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