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Post by InsaneFan on Jul 11, 2006 14:04:29 GMT -5
Yeah. Let me guess your thoughts: GACK! She probably Mary Sue'd it!
Erm...No thanks, I've seen the kinda stuff she posts.
I wonder if I left the stove on...XD Well, if ya dun trust me, dun bother reading it. If you have nothing better to do, please humor me and read it. www.fanfiction.net/s/3039075/1/ |
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Post by Beavergard Q. Kazoo on Jul 11, 2006 14:12:10 GMT -5
Don't sell yourself short. Lynn is in no way, shape, or form Mary Sue. I feel sorry for her, and that's what an author wants in their stories. Please, go on. I'm dying to hear more.
Oh, and as a note, you need to describe what these characters look like.
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Post by SkittleMonkey on Jul 11, 2006 14:14:01 GMT -5
Hey, it's really good so far! I MUST know what happens, you gotta keep going!
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Post by InsaneFan on Jul 11, 2006 14:16:30 GMT -5
*blinkblink* Um, there is no more. What happens to her is what happens to every other imaginary friend that comes to Foster's: Herriman or Frankie answers the door, she gets shown around the house, she slowly gets over the loss of her friend and gets adopted by another kid. That's just what happens.
Oh, and descriptions don't matter. The story doesn't require them. Use your imagination.
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Post by hernamewascandy on Jul 11, 2006 15:02:18 GMT -5
wow that's actually a good fanfic of foster's out of the ones I've attempted to read. Very good
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Post by ch3353h4xx0rrrrr on Jul 11, 2006 17:19:34 GMT -5
Oooh, the poor thing...
Though, it was rather cheesy that Lynn was making a scrapbook of the wonderful moment's they've had the day she gets abandoned...
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Post by InsaneFan on Jul 12, 2006 10:43:26 GMT -5
It was? Sorry. I'll try to squeeze the cheesey out of my fanfics before I post them next time. XP
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Post by ch3353h4xx0rrrrr on Jul 12, 2006 11:27:00 GMT -5
Yeah... the weird thing is that it just disappeared after that. But it's okay.
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drakenea
Settling In
I'm with the Imaginary.
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Post by drakenea on Jul 12, 2006 17:26:50 GMT -5
I think it's good. But I want more.I'm curious of what happens next.
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Post by InsaneFan on Jul 12, 2006 18:38:08 GMT -5
Er, sorry...I guess I should've made an author's note saying that I won't write anything more with Lynn. Well...I might...If I get a bunch of reviews from people saying they absolutely want more. I'm not that great a writer, I'm not sure I could go father and accurately write for the Foster's cast...
But yeah, my fic was meant only as a small look into what an imaginary friend goes through, not as a starting chapter of a long story.
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Post by Beavergard Q. Kazoo on Jul 12, 2006 20:07:10 GMT -5
Well, I think it's FINE to stop there, then. That's actually a good and ORIGINAL idea for a fic, one not centered on life at Foster's, but the day of abandonment. You just earned yourself a 'OMG ORIGINAL IDEA' star  Still, it's a little cheap to not describe what they look like. I suggest you add in descriptions. |
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Post by InsaneFan on Jul 12, 2006 20:11:59 GMT -5
GASP! I'll treasure that star forever! =3
Well, I never never actually imagined what they look like. XD It wasn't really relevant to the story either, so I didn't bother. But if I were to continue on, I'd think of something...
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Post by Fomalhaut on Jul 19, 2006 16:41:28 GMT -5
Just reviewed it.
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Post by InsaneFan on Jul 21, 2006 20:32:34 GMT -5
I saw. THANK YOU FOR THE CC.
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Hey, I know this good-lookin' guy!
