Edwardo Fitzgerald

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Here is my first FHFIF fanfic. It involves the characters going on a boat which sinks. Here's the start:

It was a typical Friday afternoon at Foster's. Mac showed up on

schedule and immediately went to see Bloo. On the way upstairs, he saw

Frankie sweeping the stairs.

"Hi Mac," Frankie said, "You seem to be in a good mood."

"Yeah," Mac replied, "My mom made Terrance get a new job, and his new

job keeps him out of the house which keeps him from beating me up. It's

also the weekend, and I have no homework!"

Mac soon entered Bloo's room where Bloo eagerly greeted him.

"Hi Mac, hi buddy, hi pal!" Bloo said.

"What seems to be all the excitement?" Mac asked.

"I guess you didn't hear," Wilt explained, "Madame Foster is throwing a party tomorrow on a boat. There will be food, music, and a lot of stuff on this cruise."

"Cool," Mac replied, "May I come?"

"Sure," Wilt answered.

"But I think I'll go easy on the sugar," Mac said, "I'd rather not have a repeat of last time..."

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Here's the next part:

The next day, Mac, Bloo, Frankie, Herriman, Madame Foster, Wilt,
Edwardo, Coco, and a group of other I.F.'s met down at the dock. just then, they heard a voice say, "Room for two more?"

Mac turned around and saw Louise and Cheese. Madame Foster said there was plenty of room. Shortly after that, Goo appeared and asked to come. Madame Foster also allowed Goo to come.

"Just as long as you don't create a lot of more friends," Herriman
added.

Just then, someone greeted the group and told them that Madame Foster's group would be getting on the boat at pier 36 and pointed in the general direction.

"Come along now," Herriman said as they headed towards pier 36.

"Pier 1, only 35 more to go, "Goo said as they walked past pier 1. As they walked by pier 2, Goo said "Pier 2, only 34 to go."

"We can count," mumbled Frankie.

"Pier 3, only 33 more to go," Goo continued. At pier 4, Goo said,"Pier 4, only 32 to go..."

Eventually...

"Pier 34, 2 more to go," Goo said, not noticing the annoyed looks on Mac's, Bloo's, Frankie's, Herriman's, and Coco's faces.

"Pier 35, one more to go," Goo continued, "Pier 36, yay! We're here!"

"Finally," Mac said relieved.

The group looked up at a large white and blue boat.

"Hey," Bloo said, "How come it's called the Edwardo Fitzgerald?"

"I helped out a bit when it was being built," Edwardo said, "So they decided to give me some credit in the name."

"I would have named it the Blootanic!" Bloo replied.

The group walked up a gangplank onto the ship. Some of the crew was watching. One had his back turned. Upon turning around, the crew member was none other then Terrance, Mac's brother.

"Well," Terrance said as he watched Mac and friends get on, "So Mac and his posse are coming aboard. I will make sure that this trip is something they won't soon forget!"

Terrance had a look of evil in his eyes. Moments later, the captain
told Terrance to get back to work, which Terrance did after muttering something.

So far, after the first two chapters, what does everyone think?

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Here's part 3 of this fan-fic:

Back with Mac and the gang, Herriman was taking a tally on the party room and the refreshments.

"I am pleased to say that this meets all codes for boats and party supplies."

Meanwhile, Mac grabbed a can of diet cola and joined Bloo up on deck.

"Hey Mac, what's with the diet soda?" Bloo asked, "You on a diet?"

"No Bloo," Mac replied, "I'm trying not to become hyper like last time!"

As they walked, they saw Cheese and Louise on the bow of the ship.

"I'm cereal of the chocolate milk!" Cheese said dumbly.

Just then, Goo joined them.

"You trying to do the scene from that movie?" Goo asked, "Well maybe he should look like Leonardo DiCaprio!"

With that, an imaginary friend that looked like a combination of Cheese and Leonardo Decaprio appeared and shouted from the bow, "I'm king of the world!"

Moments later, Goo imagined a female IF that joined "Leonardo DiCheeserio" and said, "I'm flying!"

"Goo," Mac said, "Don't start with creating lots more imaginary friends!"

"Okay Mac," Good said and left the bow.

Meanwhile, Terrance was continuing his duties when he noticed a flair gun. When no one was looking, he grabbed it.

"This will come in handy," Terrance said.

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*gasp* While I was on the Triumph(a Carnival cruise ship), I couldn't help but imagine the trouble the gang would get into if they were to go. I started writing it out as a fanfic, but since I'm no good at writing, I probably won't finish it, let alone put it on the internet.

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Back with Mac and the gang, Herriman was taking a tally on the party

room and the refreshments.

"I am pleased to say that this meets all codes for boats and party

supplies."

Meanwhile, Mac grabbed a can of diet cola and joined Bloo up on deck.

"Hey Mac, what's with the diet soda?" Bloo asked, "You on a diet?"

"No Bloo," Mac replied, "I'm trying not to become hyper like last

time!"

As they walked, they saw Cheese and Louise on the bow of the ship.

"I'm cereal of the chocolate milk!" Cheese said dumbly.

Just then, Goo joined them.

"You trying to do the scene from that movie?" Goo asked, "Well maybe he

should look like Leonardo DiCaprio!"

With that, an imaginary friend that looked like a combination of Cheese

and Leonardo Decaprio appeared and shouted from the bow, "I'm king of

the world!"

Moments later, Goo imagined a female IF that joined "Leonardo

DiCheeserio" and said, "I'm flying!"

"Goo," Mac said, "Don't start with creating lots more imaginary

friends!"

"Okay Mac," Good said and left the bow.

Meanwhile, Terrance was continuing his duties when he noticed a flair

gun. When no one was looking, he grabbed it.

"This will come in handy," Terrance said.

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Meantime, Bloo was playing paddleball, and wasn't having much luck.

"One, one, one, one," Bloo said as he kept missing the ball.

Elsewhere, Herriman was ordering Frankie around as if they were still

at Foster's.

"Give it a rest," Frankie said, "the crew will handle it."

"Yes, but while we're here, we should make this more ship-shape."

Herriman replied.

Up on deck, Mac, Bloo, Edwardo, Coco, and Wilt were by the pool.

"Ahhh, this is the life," said Bloo, "I could stay on this boat

forever."

"Don't get too used to it," Mac responded, "We're only going to be here

for a few hours."

In the Galley, Cheese had entered and walked up to a chef and said, "I

like chocolate milk."

"Excuse me, but you're not supposed to be here," the chef said.

"I like chocolate milk. I like cereal." Cheese said.

Later, Mac, Bloo, Wilt, Edwardo, and Coco were walking down a corridor

when Bloo asked, "So what does Terrance do?"

"He works on a boat," Mac said.

"Yeah, but do you know which one," Bloo asked.

"Yeah," Mac replied, "It is the Edwardo Fitz- Oh no, this boat!"

"Do you think knows we're on board?" Wilt asked.

"Yes I do," said a voice down the hall. Mac, Bloo, Coco, Edwardo, and

Wilt turned around to see Terrance standing in front of them.

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Terrance stood in front of Mac and the four IF's and drew the flare gun.

"Terrance, no!" Mac shouted in disbelief.

"Wedgie time," Terrance replied as he took a step towards the group.

Meanwhile, Coco laid an egg with a bulletproof vest in it.

"Um Coco, "wilt said, "that's a flare gun."

"Coco coco coco co!" Coco replied.

With that, Coco charged Terrance which made him loose his balance. The flare gun went off and went down a cowl and exploded in the engine room, starting a fire. The people in the engine room fled and got to safety moments before an explosion blew a hole in the side of the boat. The boat almost immediately began to tilt to one side.

"Now you've done it Terrance," Mac said, "You made the boat sink."

"I did?" Terrance asked.

"YES!" MAc shouted.

"You won't be able to prove it!" Terrance said as he locked the five in a room.

"Let us out!" Mac shouted.

Meanwhile, the captain ordered everyone to the lifeboats. Madame Foster, Frankie, Herriman, Goo, and some other imaginary freinds assembled on deck.

"We're missing quite a few," Frankie noticed.

"You're right Miss Frances," Herriman replied,"We'll wait five minutes before we start looking."

"I don't know how long this boat has," Frankie replied.

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Back in the locked room, Mac, Bloo, Wilt, Coco, and Edwardo were trying to think of a way out as water began to fill the room from a high mounted ventilator shaft.

"Oh no," Edwardo cried, "we're doomed!"

"This is a strange place to put a shower," Bloo said.

"Bloo, that isn't a shower," Mac replied, "The boat is sinking and the room is filling with water."

"Coco!" Coco said, "Coco coco co!"

With that, Coco laid an egg. In it was a blueprint of the boat. With that, they found a hidden door and went into the hallway. The water was up to Mac's waist.

"Quick, there's a stairwell!" Mac shouted as they climbed up.

Meanwhile, up on deck, Herriman determined it had been more than five minutes. It was time to go looking.

Meanwhile, Terrance jumped into a lifeboat and got off the sinking boat.

Back with Mac's group, they managed to make it to the boat deck and found Frankie and Herriman.

"Mac, we were looking all over for you!" Frankie said.

"Yeah, sorry, I can explain," Mac said.

They headed to the lifeboats. Wilt got there first. As people ran for the lifeboats, Wilt stepped aside and said, "Here, you can go. You're welcome, go ahead, there's plenty of room, I'll get on the next boat."

"Wilt!" Frankie said, "we've got to go."

Just before Mac got into the lifeboat, he said Louise. She was looking worried.

"Louise," Mac said, "What's wrong?"

"Cheese is missing," Louise replied, "I can't find him anywhere."

"Oh no," Mac said, "You get in the boat, we'll find Cheese."

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yay! More of the story! Suspence, action, romance excitment!

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Meanwhile, in the kitchen, Cheese wandered in despite the fact the boat was on an angle.

"I like chocolate milk!" Cheese said.

Moments later, water started to come into the kitchen, and mice started scurrying out.

"Bye doggies," Cheese said unconcerned.

Meanwhile, Mac, Bloo, Wilt, Coco, and Edwardo were searching for Cheese. They looked down a flooding hallway when they heard a familiar call, "I like chocolate milk!"

"Cheese," Mac said, "He's that way."

They went into the kitchen and found Cheese by a refrigerator while up to his waist in water.

"Cheese," Mac said, "We have to get out of here!"

"Dad-dy..." Cheese replied.

"He's not you dad!" Bloo shouted.

Mac took Cheese's hand and started to walk out, but Cheese protested.

"I want some chocolate milk," Cheese said.

"Not now," Mac said, rushed, "you can get some later."

"I want chocolate milk now," Cheese whined.

Mac reluctantly complied and poured Cheese a glass of chocolate milk. Cheese started to drink, but soon spat it out all over.

"Great," Bloo said, "just as we need, more liquid in this room."

Soon, the six of them were trying to get up on deck. They found that they had to swim underwater through a doorway.

"Bloo and I can swim," Mac said, "can you guys make it."

"Sure, no problem", Wilt said.

"Si", Edwardo said.

"Coco!" Coco said.

"What about you Cheese," Mac asked.

"Yes," Cheese replied. With that, Cheese walked off into the water and instantly sank.

From under water, they heard Cheese say, "I like cereal!"

Moments later, Wilt was giving Cheese CPR. Cheese soon regained conciousness.

"You said you can swim," Mac shouted in disbelief.

"Underwater tastes funny," Cheese replied.

Coco laid an egg with a muzzle to keep Cheese from speaking underwater and Bloo straped it on. They dove underwater with Mac and Edwardo carrying Cheese. They soon made it to safety and Wilt removed the muzzle. Cheese then stuck the muzzle in his mouth again.

"Muzzle tastes funny." Cheese said.

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Back in the lifeboats, Frankie watched helplessly as the boat continued to sink. Back on board, Mac, Bloo, Cheese, Wilt, Edwardo, and Coco made it up on deck.

"All the lifeboats are gone!" Mac shouted.

"THis is all your fault," Bloo said to Cheese.

"I pooted," Cheese replied.

The six of them ran for the part of the boat furthest from the water.

"I'm tall, I'll take me awhile to sink." Wilt said.

"Hang on!" Mac shouted as the boat started to sink.

Edwardo began to panic as the boat sank deeper and deeper. Moments later, a wave washed the six still aboard off. They surfaced moments later.

"There's a boat overthere!" Mac shouted.

The six then swam for the boat. It turned out to be the boat Terrance had escaped in by himself.

"Mac," Terrance said," So nice of you to see you."

"Coco coco coco co!" Coco shouted.

The six struggled to climb aboard, but they caused the boat to flip over throwing Mac, Bloo, Terrance, Cheese, Edwardo, Wilt and Coco into the water.

"There's another boat over there!" Mac pointed out.

The seven swam for it to the boat which contained Frankie, Herriman, Madame Foster, Goo, Louise, and other iamginary friends who helped pull the seven aboard safely.

"Cheese," Louise said as she hugged him.

"Now that were all together," Herriman said, "I demand an explination for this."

"It was Terrance's fault," Mac said, "he's responsible for the boat
sinking."

"Is that so," Frankie said.

Frankie and Herriman gave Terrance a look of anger when Madame Foster spoke up.

"Since he ruined my party, I should have a say in how he can make up for it." she said.

"Okay," Wilt said.

Soon, Terrance was single handedly rowing the lifeboat while the
occupants were making the best of it.

The end.

Well, this finishes my first fan-fic. I intend on a second fan-fic called "Please hand up and try again" which involves the return of my favorite character: The man in the cell phone suit. I have a couple other ideas, but is a story called "The Blooseidon Adventure" which is a combination between FHFIF and the movie Poseidon, which involves character deaths. The others though are more like FHFIF episodes.