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Post by Sparky on Jan 9, 2006 14:54:40 GMT -5
I just read it, and I have to admit, I'm starting to get pretty frustrated with this story. When are we actually going to find out at least a *little* bit of what's going on? Why the heck are Shaula's eyes glowing red? I know that everything is suppoed to be mysterious but when is it enough? How long do we have to wait for some answers? I mean, I *like* the story, but I can only take so many "Dunn dunn dunnnnn!!" moments, you know?
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Post by Fomalhaut on Jan 9, 2006 15:01:54 GMT -5
Don't worry, in the next chapter all will be revealed! There'll be a flashback at the day Sheila came back...
Have you reviewed it so far?
Oh yes, and will post it this week... soon!
And sorry. Just that 'til know, most of my stories had no mystery at all. Guess I've gone a bit too far... ;D
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Post by Cassini90125 on Jan 9, 2006 21:49:40 GMT -5
The suspense is killing me, and that red glow in Shaula's eyes is making me nervous. I'm dying to read your take on Wilt's past. I gotta know what Sheila's master plan is, and what she's done to Shaula. And I'm remembering that Bloo flooded the entire house just to prove that Bendy took a cookie. When he figures out who tampered with his newspaper... Well, I've got this image in my head of a big smoking crater.
I wish the chapter had been longer, but I'm enjoying this quite a lot, so I'll take what I can get.
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Post by Fomalhaut on Jan 10, 2006 13:19:47 GMT -5
Chapter 4 will be shorter, I guess... mainly it'll be about what exactly happened to Shaula when Sheila took her away.
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Post by Cassini90125 on Jan 10, 2006 21:09:47 GMT -5
I'd love to speculate about what happened between them that afternoon, but I'm drawing a complete blank. I have no idea where you're going with this, which is one of the things I enjoy about the story.
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Post by Fomalhaut on Jan 11, 2006 4:07:14 GMT -5
Just uploaded Chapter 4, made up my mind and stopped the teasing!
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Post by Cassini90125 on Jan 11, 2006 4:54:04 GMT -5
Betrayed again? I'm with Shaula; I am really, really starting to hate Sheila. The girl is beginning to look like a sociopath; no remorse, no conscience. Why is she like this? Why is she doing this? Poor Terrence, he has no idea how bad she is (although if he's really in love with her, he may know but not care).
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Post by Fomalhaut on Jan 11, 2006 9:06:19 GMT -5
I should add some answers... and will, after I get reviews. But I'll wait a while, hope it wasn't too crappy.
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Post by Cassini90125 on Jan 11, 2006 9:55:20 GMT -5
Crappy? No, not at all. It was short, but I got one question answered, which makes me happy and will keep me quiet for a little while. I'll post a review on ff.net before sunset.
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Post by Fomalhaut on Jan 11, 2006 10:14:58 GMT -5
Sunset in America or in Hungary?
Joking ;D
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Post by Cassini90125 on Jan 11, 2006 13:05:41 GMT -5
Lol! Hadn't thought of that. Sunset in New York, which I think is midnight in Hungary.
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Post by Fomalhaut on Jan 16, 2006 15:23:11 GMT -5
Chapter 5 with Wilt's past included is up. It turned out quite long.
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Post by Cassini90125 on Jan 16, 2006 16:14:12 GMT -5
Wow. Review posted. I was really moved, really touched. Thank you.
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Post by Fomalhaut on Jan 17, 2006 16:28:57 GMT -5
You think you're done for a while eh...? *evil grin* You'll never guess the spectacular twist I've just written in the next chapter! (No I'm not inventing the whole story now, I have a storyline planned, just not in details) [*Hint* S. L. Westlane will appear again, now 29 and a successful writer]
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Post by Cassini90125 on Jan 17, 2006 16:42:41 GMT -5
You'll never guess the spectacular twist I've just written in the next chapter! You're toying with me now, aren't you? ;D Fine. I will sit quietly and try not to let my curiosity drive me out of my mind. We shall see what gets to me first: Chapter Six, or the men in white coats who work at the "Institute" down the street. (Seriously, I'm really looking forward to the next part, now even more than before!)
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